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Commission: Kalypso by AfBri-Chan

:icondarkestslumber:
Vision: The lines are decent in some places, and in others marvelous. Through the line work you definitely know how to define shape and emphasize certain parts of the piece. The colors go together quite nicely. Though shading and highlights would've added more quality to the piece.
Originality: Even though this is my OC, you still helped out with the concept of her color scheme and also styling. I can see you did some things off the original concept which I liked. Such as her hair. It was originally curly, but the straight hair shown here fits her better.
Technique: The lines are sloppy in some places. And the coloring has a few white pixels in it here and there. But with dedication and practice all those errors can be easily corrected.
Impact: Overall the little details create a rather appealing style to the piece. It's sketchy and simple. Not to complex and not overly done. And that's what gives it such a nice feel.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconafbri-chan:
AfBri-Chan Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! This was my very first commission.
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:icondarkestslumber:
DarkestSlumber Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :D
I really like it~
Maybe I'll commission you again sometime ;)
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:iconafbri-chan:
AfBri-Chan Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha thank you!
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:icondarkestslumber:
DarkestSlumber Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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